Monday, January 12, 2015

referring week 78: participants talent show (28) of mangosteens and durians by fiveloaf



Women, are like mangosteens.
Smooth skin, cold,  richly  hued,
juicy  and  white  on  the  inside.
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Men,       are        like        durians.
Thick-skinned,   thorny,   smells,
keeps     dropping      off      trees.
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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

shape poetry in a non sharp shape sense,
a good job from fiveloaf poet.

Anonymous said...

a good choice.

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

good for fiveloaf.

Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said...

wonderful...

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